creditcrazy-channel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stocking the Bakery]

I'd say the top one seems more somber while the bottom one is more likely so honestly it depends on what feeling you want.

[Realism practice: Old lady]

I think you should use vertical lines more as she looks like she is in a wind chamber and her neck is twisted. You could also improve the neck by starting it by drawing the wind pipe first then the out line. Eyes are really big for a real person.

[Radiodemon]

You did a great job in every way with the only thing that I can really critek is the fact that Alistor has a stiff pose. I'd say that if you were to have him bend back a little more this might fix the problem. Also the on a personal note it's a little off putting seeing a Alistor that is a little realistic.

[Pranks are now business!]

The character looks like he got his arm amputated and I do remember from the video that that is not the case. But all around I doesn't look like ms paint in fact it's down right pleasing to look at.

Twoeliz responds:

Thank you for the critique! Yeah their arms are quite weird. I tried to change my characters as little as possible from their original design so their hands not always visible and because they can be cartoony I don't always feel the need to show their hands when they should be visible. But their hands looking amputated is a very interesting point. And it is actually drawn with ibispaint x. I'm glad you were able to enjoy this picture!